Thursday, May 6, 2010

Message In A Bottle......

a message in a bottle
so long ago
years have passed without response

laying on the sand
idle thoughts bleach my mind
a hot breeze fevers my body

sunlight unforgiving
beats down on skin and bones
melting my will to live

are you there?
do you still think of me?
I miss you so

a message in a bottle
floats gaining and receding
in time and tides


Wayne Pitchko said...

nice bottle Mellanie....with terrifc message....thanks for this

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you Wayne for reading my work. I am glad you liked it.


Robin said...

Hmm...that's a thought that passes through our heads from time to time. Enjoyed it.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks Robin. I am happy that you liked it.