Tuesday, September 29, 2009


sin of hubris
sin of lust
cloaked in black sugar

truth can be found
at the end of the wall
pray God we meet before

5 comments:

Anne said...

wonderful! black sugar-great image!

Beloved Haiku Dreams said...

Thank you Anne. I am glad you liked it.

love-Melanie-bhd

Deeptesh said...

Great Imageries.Great that I have found U!C my poems 2 n tl me wht u think.

www.deepteshpoetry.blogspot.com

Beatrice V said...

Melanie, I just came across an old link for your previous website (beloveddreamer.com) it seems they are using a similar image of a rose -just like you have here on your blog, they are to all appearances a 'dating site' now. Just thought you may like to know, in case you want to have a different image on your blog, or in case there is any cross-identification between them and your own blog.

mariposa said...

Nice poem! :)