Tuesday, September 22, 2009

Fog......


autumn damp mist rises
crunching red black leaves
dense fog hurries summers death

11 comments:

Marc Latham said...

Nice seasonal haiku Melanie. Fits the day here in the UK today.

Jim said...

Hi Melanie, this is soooooo simple and plain, yet it tells us exactly as we know it is. Very nice, I like it.
That isn't saying I am ready for Fall.
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Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

loved your haiku!!

so relatable considering the weather here..

zoya gautam said...

.. autumn puts life in perspective .

many thanks ..

Tumblewords: said...

These words resonate! Vivid seasonal imagery. Fall feels like a noose to me. Brings me up short and tosses my dreams to the side.

SandyCarlson said...

The fog most definitely does that.

Kelvin S. Mangundayao said...

It's great!!!:)

Marc Latham said...

Hi Melanie, thanks for joining the Folding Mirror site. I'll link to this site from fmpoetry if that's okay. Cheers, Marc.

Amias said...

Perfect! I am glad fall is around the corner, and happy for the rain, because the heat was too much ... and yes, I love the fog.

Quiet Paths said...

Very vivid!

SarahA said...

'dense fog hurries summers death' So purrrrrrrrrrrrect; you.