autumn damp mist rises
crunching red black leaves
dense fog hurries summers death
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
1916
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!
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11 comments:
Nice seasonal haiku Melanie. Fits the day here in the UK today.
Hi Melanie, this is soooooo simple and plain, yet it tells us exactly as we know it is. Very nice, I like it.
That isn't saying I am ready for Fall.
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loved your haiku!!
so relatable considering the weather here..
.. autumn puts life in perspective .
many thanks ..
These words resonate! Vivid seasonal imagery. Fall feels like a noose to me. Brings me up short and tosses my dreams to the side.
The fog most definitely does that.
It's great!!!:)
Hi Melanie, thanks for joining the Folding Mirror site. I'll link to this site from fmpoetry if that's okay. Cheers, Marc.
Perfect! I am glad fall is around the corner, and happy for the rain, because the heat was too much ... and yes, I love the fog.
Very vivid!
'dense fog hurries summers death' So purrrrrrrrrrrrect; you.
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