Tuesday, September 8, 2009

My Love For You........



love fuels my heart
body trembles at your touch
grasping soul bleeds souls alike

9 comments:

anthonynorth said...

An excellent last line. Nicely done.

Tumblewords: said...

I'll double Anthony's comment!

SandyCarlson said...

Intimacy! Beautifully done.

Jim said...

Hi B.D. Touchy feely here.
I like it, you have penned the greatest feeling there is in my book!
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Amias said...

The massive use of the word "love" can kill a poem, as it is over done --- But you did very well with it .. the last line is unique and creative.

Patti said...

"grasping soul bleeds souls alike"- what a wonderful line...nicely done!

zoya gautam said...

lovely ..

DeLi said...

i know how it feels

gabrielle said...

powerful last line,

a river where everything merges