Cassiopeia Rises: My Love For You........

Tuesday, September 8, 2009

My Love For You........

love fuels my heart
body trembles at your touch
grasping soul bleeds souls alike

9 comments:

anthonynorth said...: An excellent last line. Nicely done.; September 8, 2009 at 5:20 PM
Tumblewords: said...: I'll double Anthony's comment!; September 8, 2009 at 7:31 PM
SandyCarlson said...: Intimacy! Beautifully done.; September 8, 2009 at 8:08 PM
Jim said...: Hi B.D. Touchy feely here.
I like it, you have penned the greatest feeling there is in my book!
..; September 8, 2009 at 9:43 PM
Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...: The massive use of the word "love" can kill a poem, as it is over done --- But you did very well with it .. the last line is unique and creative.; September 9, 2009 at 12:49 AM
Patti said...: "grasping soul bleeds souls alike"- what a wonderful line...nicely done!; September 9, 2009 at 1:46 PM
zoya gautam said...: lovely ..; September 9, 2009 at 4:41 PM
DeLi said...: i know how it feels; September 10, 2009 at 11:17 AM
gabrielle said...: powerful last line,

a river where everything merges; September 11, 2009 at 1:39 AM

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