Cassiopeia Rises: The Floating Feather

Tuesday, September 20, 2011

The Floating Feather

wind blows the feather
down dark dirty littered streets
silently it flows

29 comments:

Tumblewords: said...: Nice!!; September 21, 2011 at 12:53 PM
Anonymous said...: I can see it...:); September 21, 2011 at 1:01 PM
Anonymous said...: Simple and sweet!!I can feel it.; September 21, 2011 at 2:14 PM
Nanka said...: Lovely colors in the peacock feathers!!; September 21, 2011 at 2:21 PM
Marbles in My Pocket said...: Amazingly vivid image painted with so very few words. Excellent!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/in-the-blink-of-an-eye/; September 21, 2011 at 3:24 PM
nitewrit said...: A lot of tension and a lot of life, fear and expectation caught here in these few words.

Larry; September 21, 2011 at 4:35 PM
Anonymous said...: Natural beauty in an unnatural place. Beautiful. Here's my potluck entry: http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/09/16/love-lost/; September 21, 2011 at 8:09 PM
Ann LeFlore said...: Such a lovely concept of feather floating down dark and dirty streets
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/21/remember-the-years/; September 21, 2011 at 11:36 PM
Alcina said...: Essence of the float very well depicted!

Alcina; September 22, 2011 at 1:09 AM
Susie Clevenger said...: Nice one...a feather's last flight perhaps; September 22, 2011 at 1:26 AM
Kay said...: I can see so much within these few words. A fragile soul spoiled by the ravages of life, perhaps. The picture this paints is amazing. One has only to use their imagination.; September 22, 2011 at 7:25 AM
Anonymous said...: nice haiku.. my thursday..
http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/human-race-human-waste/; September 22, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Oh, Tumblewords. I have been thinking of you. Hope all is well. Thanks for your kind comment.

Melanie; September 22, 2011 at 2:15 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks Sandra for reading this poem.

Melanie; September 22, 2011 at 2:16 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: antomaniax glad you liked it.

Melanie; September 22, 2011 at 2:16 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks Nanka for stopping by and reading my poem.

Melanie; September 22, 2011 at 2:17 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: MIM, so glad you liked my poem. Thanks for reading it.

melanie; September 22, 2011 at 2:18 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks Lary for reading my poem.

Melanie; September 22, 2011 at 2:19 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: mysticmarleei. Glad you liked my poem.

Melanie; September 22, 2011 at 2:20 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Ann, thanks for stopping by and reading my poem. Glad you liked it.

melanie; September 22, 2011 at 2:21 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Alcina, glad you liked the poem.

Melanie; September 22, 2011 at 2:22 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Susie, who knows where my ideas come from. Glad you liked it.

Melanie; September 22, 2011 at 2:23 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks so much Kay. I never know what I am going to write. So who knows perhaps you are right.

Melanie; September 22, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: fiveloaf, thanks for your comment. I will stop by. I am behind in my answers.

melanie; September 22, 2011 at 2:26 PM
Lu Ann said...: I wished that feather was me...

The image is beautiful. Thanks for sharing!

Happy Rally.; September 24, 2011 at 12:43 PM
Anonymous said...: I like this imagery! Strong.; September 25, 2011 at 8:28 PM
The Poet said...: Hello.
Awesome imagery.
Nicely penned.

Thanks for sharing.

Your Song Of Love; September 26, 2011 at 10:24 PM
Anonymous said...: Whimsical imagery! Lovely!; September 30, 2011 at 7:51 AM
The Poetry Palace said...: perfect.

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Happy Rally.
Thanks a ton for the beautiful entry and instant participation.; September 30, 2011 at 1:51 PM

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