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I can see it...:)
Simple and sweet!!I can feel it.
Lovely colors in the peacock feathers!!
Amazingly vivid image painted with so very few words. Excellent!http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/in-the-blink-of-an-eye/
A lot of tension and a lot of life, fear and expectation caught here in these few words.Larry
Natural beauty in an unnatural place. Beautiful. Here's my potluck entry: http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/09/16/love-lost/
Such a lovely concept of feather floating down dark and dirty streetshttp://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/21/remember-the-years/
Essence of the float very well depicted!Alcina
Nice one...a feather's last flight perhaps
I can see so much within these few words. A fragile soul spoiled by the ravages of life, perhaps. The picture this paints is amazing. One has only to use their imagination.
nice haiku.. my thursday..http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/human-race-human-waste/
Oh, Tumblewords. I have been thinking of you. Hope all is well. Thanks for your kind comment.Melanie
Thanks Sandra for reading this poem.Melanie
antomaniax glad you liked it.Melanie
Thanks Nanka for stopping by and reading my poem.Melanie
MIM, so glad you liked my poem. Thanks for reading it.melanie
Thanks Lary for reading my poem.Melanie
mysticmarleei. Glad you liked my poem.Melanie
Ann, thanks for stopping by and reading my poem. Glad you liked it.melanie
Alcina, glad you liked the poem.Melanie
Susie, who knows where my ideas come from. Glad you liked it.Melanie
Thanks so much Kay. I never know what I am going to write. So who knows perhaps you are right.Melanie
fiveloaf, thanks for your comment. I will stop by. I am behind in my answers.melanie
I wished that feather was me... The image is beautiful. Thanks for sharing!Happy Rally.
I like this imagery! Strong.
Hello.Awesome imagery. Nicely penned.Thanks for sharing.Your Song Of Love
Whimsical imagery! Lovely!
perfect.please let us know after you are done returning favors and making a minimum 18 comments,Happy Rally.Thanks a ton for the beautiful entry and instant participation.
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!