Tuesday, September 20, 2011

The Floating Feather

wind blows the feather
down dark dirty littered streets
silently it flows

29 comments:

Tumblewords: said...

Nice!!

sandra said...

I can see it...:)

antomaniax said...

Simple and sweet!!I can feel it.

Nanka said...

Lovely colors in the peacock feathers!!

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Amazingly vivid image painted with so very few words. Excellent!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/in-the-blink-of-an-eye/

Larry, aka The Kid and The Old Goat said...

A lot of tension and a lot of life, fear and expectation caught here in these few words.

Larry

mysticmarleei said...

Natural beauty in an unnatural place. Beautiful. Here's my potluck entry: http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/09/16/love-lost/

Ann LeFlore said...

Such a lovely concept of feather floating down dark and dirty streets
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/21/remember-the-years/

Alcina said...

Essence of the float very well depicted!

Alcina

Susie Clevenger said...

Nice one...a feather's last flight perhaps

Kay said...

I can see so much within these few words. A fragile soul spoiled by the ravages of life, perhaps. The picture this paints is amazing. One has only to use their imagination.

fiveloaf said...

nice haiku.. my thursday..
http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/human-race-human-waste/

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Oh, Tumblewords. I have been thinking of you. Hope all is well. Thanks for your kind comment.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Sandra for reading this poem.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

antomaniax glad you liked it.



Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Nanka for stopping by and reading my poem.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

MIM, so glad you liked my poem. Thanks for reading it.


melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Lary for reading my poem.



Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

mysticmarleei. Glad you liked my poem.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Ann, thanks for stopping by and reading my poem. Glad you liked it.


melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Alcina, glad you liked the poem.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Susie, who knows where my ideas come from. Glad you liked it.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks so much Kay. I never know what I am going to write. So who knows perhaps you are right.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

fiveloaf, thanks for your comment. I will stop by. I am behind in my answers.


melanie

Lu Ann said...

I wished that feather was me...

The image is beautiful. Thanks for sharing!

Happy Rally.

muzzleflashing.com said...

I like this imagery! Strong.

Andy said...

Hello.
Awesome imagery.
Nicely penned.

Thanks for sharing.

Your Song Of Love

magicinthebackyard said...

Whimsical imagery! Lovely!

The Poetry Palace said...

perfect.

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Happy Rally.
Thanks a ton for the beautiful entry and instant participation.