Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Patience I Have None

patience I have none
waiting for your words of love
yet still you have me

have my body close
captured by the sweetest smile
my love remains true

28 comments:

Ramesh Sood said...

I have always liked your Love haikus..

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Oh Ramesh, thank you so much. I read all of your poetry and love the ant and the elephant.


Melanie

Susie Clevenger said...

Love..the beauty of it...and the need for patience...great job!

Umamaheswari said...

This is wonderfully penned ..

Gemma Wiseman said...

O such beautiful love haikus!

Amity said...

ah...what a romantic haiku...reminds me of...you know what...:)

lovely take Melanie!

Nanka said...

Run out of patience and yet so true!! Good endurance!!

imnotaverse said...

A sad truth.

kaykuala said...

Melanie, the yearnings make it sensuous and patience prevails.

Hank

mjshorts said...

Lovely work Melanie
How often we wait patiently for those tender words of love.

Rekha said...

Beautiful ... more words would mar the comment.

Leo said...

passionate and romantic.. i know it is repetitive.. but for lack of better suited words for your wonderful haiku, i use them :)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Susie, glad you liked it.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Umamaheswari , thank you for your comment. Happy you enjoyed the read. I en joy your blog.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Gemma, I do so love to write of love. Love makes us human.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Yeah Amity, me too. I think I am in love at this moment. Not sure but writing about it helps.



Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Yes Nanka, I endure much for love. And will endure even more. Glad you enjoyed my poem.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

imnotaverse, it is a sad fact of life. Then love is worth the wait. Thank you for stopping.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

I agree kaykuala. It is well worth the wait. Thank you for your comment.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

mjshorts, thanks much for your comments. I will wait till the end for true love.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks Leo. I don't mind. I am happy you enjoyed my Haiku.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Rekha, must have missed your comment the first go around. Thanks so much for stopping and I am very glad that you like my Haiku. Love your blog.


Melanie

beccagivens said...

you write of love with passion and romance ~~ well done!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I'm with you, Melanie: I have no patience at all!

Patience of the Ant

dsnake1 said...

beautiful work!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks MMT for having to read yet another Haiku. Love your work.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

dsnak1, much thanks for stopping by. So glad you enjoyed my Haiku.



Melanie

Traci B said...

Wonderful haiku, Melanie. I remember feeling that way, once upon a time...