patience I have none
waiting for your words of love
yet still you have me
have my body close
captured by the sweetest smile
my love remains true
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
1916
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!
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28 comments:
I have always liked your Love haikus..
Oh Ramesh, thank you so much. I read all of your poetry and love the ant and the elephant.
Melanie
Love..the beauty of it...and the need for patience...great job!
This is wonderfully penned ..
O such beautiful love haikus!
ah...what a romantic haiku...reminds me of...you know what...:)
lovely take Melanie!
Run out of patience and yet so true!! Good endurance!!
A sad truth.
Melanie, the yearnings make it sensuous and patience prevails.
Hank
Lovely work Melanie
How often we wait patiently for those tender words of love.
Beautiful ... more words would mar the comment.
passionate and romantic.. i know it is repetitive.. but for lack of better suited words for your wonderful haiku, i use them :)
Thanks Susie, glad you liked it.
Melanie
Umamaheswari , thank you for your comment. Happy you enjoyed the read. I en joy your blog.
Melanie
Gemma, I do so love to write of love. Love makes us human.
Melanie
Yeah Amity, me too. I think I am in love at this moment. Not sure but writing about it helps.
Melanie
Yes Nanka, I endure much for love. And will endure even more. Glad you enjoyed my poem.
Melanie
imnotaverse, it is a sad fact of life. Then love is worth the wait. Thank you for stopping.
Melanie
I agree kaykuala. It is well worth the wait. Thank you for your comment.
Melanie
mjshorts, thanks much for your comments. I will wait till the end for true love.
Melanie
Much thanks Leo. I don't mind. I am happy you enjoyed my Haiku.
Melanie
Rekha, must have missed your comment the first go around. Thanks so much for stopping and I am very glad that you like my Haiku. Love your blog.
Melanie
you write of love with passion and romance ~~ well done!
I'm with you, Melanie: I have no patience at all!
Patience of the Ant
beautiful work!
Much thanks MMT for having to read yet another Haiku. Love your work.
Melanie
dsnak1, much thanks for stopping by. So glad you enjoyed my Haiku.
Melanie
Wonderful haiku, Melanie. I remember feeling that way, once upon a time...
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