Friday, September 23, 2011

Mountain Water

high mountain water
melts overflowing rivers
journeys on to springs

12 comments:

Saras said...

Nice flowing lines like a stream!

Nanka said...

Can feel the movement! Lovely flow!

Tigerbrite said...

Nice haiku. Well done.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you my friends. I have broken my shoulder and am in great pain. I must type with one finger.


Melanie

Grace said...

I like that overflowing water.

Hope you are coping up with your pain ~

andy sewina said...

Mountain water, don't you just wanna drink it?

Cool post!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

"springs"

Could be seasons, could be water sources. I like the ambiguity!


My Watery Haiku

The Orange Tree said...

very dynamic words.
love your Haiku.

The Cello Strings said...

the imagery is beautiful.

Happy Rally.

beccagivens said...

Absolutely lovely imagery!

Andy said...

Hello.
Mountain water is definitely sweet.
Nice image.

Sending you lots of virtual hugs for a speedy recovery.

Your Song Of Love

Okelle said...

Very watery