high mountain water
melts overflowing rivers
journeys on to springs
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
1916
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!
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12 comments:
Nice flowing lines like a stream!
Can feel the movement! Lovely flow!
Nice haiku. Well done.
Thank you my friends. I have broken my shoulder and am in great pain. I must type with one finger.
Melanie
I like that overflowing water.
Hope you are coping up with your pain ~
Mountain water, don't you just wanna drink it?
Cool post!
"springs"
Could be seasons, could be water sources. I like the ambiguity!
My Watery Haiku
very dynamic words.
love your Haiku.
the imagery is beautiful.
Happy Rally.
Absolutely lovely imagery!
Hello.
Mountain water is definitely sweet.
Nice image.
Sending you lots of virtual hugs for a speedy recovery.
Your Song Of Love
Very watery
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