Friday, September 2, 2011

Windmills IN My Mind

windmills in my mind
spinning silky webs serene
sensuous colors

shooting stars arise
tick behind my gray blue eyes
kaleidoscope shines

moonbeams bend and sway
windmills ever spinning bright
long into the night

13 comments:

Grace said...

Very lovely haiku set....like the spinning images ~

imnotaverse said...

Nice haiku chain.

Nanka said...

Elegantly beautiful with gorgeous imagery!!

mjshorts said...

A great haiku set.
Some tremendous imagery.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks Grace. Glad you liked it.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

imnotaverse,Thanks for stopping by and reading my Haiku.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you Nanka for your comment. They mean a great deal to me.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

mjshorts, glad you liked my Haiku.


Melanie

Rek said...

Beautiful and emotive set of haikus...does it speak of day dreams or something deeper?

andy sewina said...

kaleidoscope shines
I love that line!!!

Kaleidoscopes really do it for me!

Leo said...

the first is the best. loved that most in its visualness :)

iblogmoore (Amanda Moore) said...

very sultry Melanie, it provides great imagery it needs no photo to support it, well done!

TraciB said...

Mesmerizing flow in this one, like watching a windmill's blades slowly spin.