Cassiopeia Rises: Windmills IN My Mind

Friday, September 2, 2011

Windmills IN My Mind

windmills in my mind
spinning silky webs serene
sensuous colors

shooting stars arise
tick behind my gray blue eyes
kaleidoscope shines

moonbeams bend and sway
windmills ever spinning bright
long into the night

13 comments:

Grace said...: Very lovely haiku set....like the spinning images ~; September 2, 2011 at 6:11 PM
Anonymous said...: Nice haiku chain.; September 3, 2011 at 2:57 AM
Nanka said...: Elegantly beautiful with gorgeous imagery!!; September 3, 2011 at 3:53 AM
Anonymous said...: A great haiku set.
Some tremendous imagery.; September 3, 2011 at 8:49 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Much thanks Grace. Glad you liked it.

Melanie; September 3, 2011 at 2:11 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: imnotaverse,Thanks for stopping by and reading my Haiku.

Melanie; September 3, 2011 at 2:18 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank you Nanka for your comment. They mean a great deal to me.

Melanie; September 3, 2011 at 2:19 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: mjshorts, glad you liked my Haiku.

Melanie; September 3, 2011 at 2:20 PM
Rek Sesh said...: Beautiful and emotive set of haikus...does it speak of day dreams or something deeper?; September 3, 2011 at 2:56 PM
andy sewina said...: kaleidoscope shines
I love that line!!!

Kaleidoscopes really do it for me!; September 3, 2011 at 9:28 PM
Vinay Leo R. said...: the first is the best. loved that most in its visualness :); September 3, 2011 at 10:27 PM
Anonymous said...: very sultry Melanie, it provides great imagery it needs no photo to support it, well done!; September 3, 2011 at 10:57 PM
TraciB said...: Mesmerizing flow in this one, like watching a windmill's blades slowly spin.; September 12, 2011 at 4:35 PM

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