Tuesday, September 13, 2011

My Elixir

you my elixir
a love so deep that it pains
your touch like fire

thrills my senses so
no other taunts me as you
waiting I lie here

longing for your arms
and kisses to taste my lips
I am caught in you


Rekha said...

This expresses so well the longings of a desperate lover.

Susie Clevenger said...

the desperation of longing...well said

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Rekha. She is a lonely and desperate lover. Glad you liked it.


Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks Susie for stopping to read my poem. Not many from the Haiku Heights Challenge do. I am happy you liked it.


Morning said...

hungry and powerful emotions.
well done.

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Wonderfully intense write! Love it!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Oh, there is passion here!

A Little Elixir

Gemma Wiseman said...

I really thought I had commented on this but it seems to be invisible! So I'll try again!

Haikus rich and weighty with love's longing!