Tuesday, September 13, 2011

My Elixir

you my elixir
a love so deep that it pains
your touch like fire

thrills my senses so
no other taunts me as you
waiting I lie here

longing for your arms
and kisses to taste my lips
I am caught in you

8 comments:

Rekha said...

This expresses so well the longings of a desperate lover.

Susie Clevenger said...

the desperation of longing...well said

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Rekha. She is a lonely and desperate lover. Glad you liked it.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks Susie for stopping to read my poem. Not many from the Haiku Heights Challenge do. I am happy you liked it.


Melanie

Morning said...

hungry and powerful emotions.
well done.

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Wonderfully intense write! Love it!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Oh, there is passion here!

A Little Elixir

Gemma Wiseman said...

I really thought I had commented on this but it seems to be invisible! So I'll try again!

Haikus rich and weighty with love's longing!