At night I lie with this notebook on your side of the bed.As once I lie next to your heart. Remembering our life together is all I have.And times shadow will come to claim me soon, as will go this notebook into my grave.
claimed by shadows all
to soon;my heart grieves for you
I would follow now
20 comments:
romantic...beautiful!!
...haunting...
so full of sadness and longing
True love is timeless, it lingers on. It soothes the soul so that life goes on.
Hank
Sad and romantic and beautiful. Damn the shadows.
Very beautiful! You conveyed the emotion really well. I can definitely relate to this poem
So much longing!
Romantic, sad, touching.
Thank you Sandra for your comment. I am glad you stopped by.
Melanie
poyttept, It has been a long time my friend glad you stopped by.
Melanie
Lolamouse, love is often sad. That is the way of life. Thank you for stopping.
Melanie
Kaykuala, often there is no one left to remember a great love. Thank you for reading my poem.
Melanie
I agree Sandy. Damn those shadows. But try as we will they follows us. So glad you liked my poem.
Melanie
Laura Maria, much thanks for your kind comment. So happy you enjoyed my poem.
Melanie
Yes Mama Zen, being human means a life of many longings. Thank you for reading my work.
Melanie
Harshad,much thanks for reading my poem. Somehow most things I write are sad as is life.
Melanie
This one is so sad and so beautiful..
But as shelley says.."our sweetest songs are those that speak of saddest thoughts"
Really beautiful..
Binoy
Sad, Melanie, but nice. It brings me memories such as you wrote.
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BTW, my granddaughter is getting married tonight. I get to sit on the same row as my ex. Each of us with our newer spouses.
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profound.
sadness makes life more fruitful.
divine words.
thanks for posting...
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