Cassiopeia Rises: Hidden

Thursday, September 8, 2011

Hidden

hidden beneath your
pliant skin your heart
sensuous you are

I penetrate this lushness
cracking your veneer
seeking inner warmth

15 comments:

Alcina said...: beautiful penning..
keep musing! :); September 9, 2011 at 1:08 AM
Anonymous said...: How lovely!; September 9, 2011 at 6:29 AM
Maude Lynn said...: "Pliant skin" is so vivid! Love it.; September 9, 2011 at 12:36 PM
Anonymous said...: Ummm wow that is some hot stuff!; September 9, 2011 at 9:45 PM
Kalyan said...: lovely sensual lines...nicely crafted words!; September 10, 2011 at 6:33 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank you all. I am so behind please forgive. I love to hear from you.

Melanie; September 10, 2011 at 9:20 AM
Vinay Leo R. said...: repetition on the posting? :) i just seem to have been at this very same post on your blog..; September 11, 2011 at 10:42 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: No Leo you have read something like this but it is my first showing of this haiku.

Melanie; September 11, 2011 at 4:53 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: ThanK you Alcina, so glad you liked it

Melanie; September 11, 2011 at 4:54 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank You Alcina. Glad you liked it and I will keep going.

Melanie; September 12, 2011 at 1:45 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Much thanks imnotaverse for reading my work.

Melanie; September 12, 2011 at 1:47 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: So happy you liked it Mama Zen.

Melanie; September 12, 2011 at 1:48 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: I like to both read and write hot stuff once in a while. Thanks Amanda.

Melanie; September 12, 2011 at 1:49 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank you Kalyan. Glad you liked it.

Melanie; September 12, 2011 at 1:59 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Leo my friend you were right. Somehow I got things messed up. It is the same poem.

Melanie; September 12, 2011 at 6:40 PM

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