Thursday, September 8, 2011

Hidden

hidden beneath your
pliant skin your heart
sensuous you are

I penetrate this lushness
cracking your veneer
seeking inner warmth

15 comments:

Alcina said...

beautiful penning..
keep musing! :)

imnotaverse said...

How lovely!

Mama Zen said...

"Pliant skin" is so vivid! Love it.

iblogmoore (Amanda Moore) said...

Ummm wow that is some hot stuff!

Kalyan said...

lovely sensual lines...nicely crafted words!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you all. I am so behind please forgive. I love to hear from you.



Melanie

Leo said...

repetition on the posting? :) i just seem to have been at this very same post on your blog..

Cassiopeia Rises said...

No Leo you have read something like this but it is my first showing of this haiku.

Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

ThanK you Alcina, so glad you liked it



Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank You Alcina. Glad you liked it and I will keep going.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks imnotaverse for reading my work.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

So happy you liked it Mama Zen.



Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

I like to both read and write hot stuff once in a while. Thanks Amanda.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you Kalyan. Glad you liked it.

Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Leo my friend you were right. Somehow I got things messed up. It is the same poem.


Melanie