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This is cute. Very appropriate!:-)
yesyesyesfrom my youthful past--->"""the laughing laundry"""how good of you to catch THATand share...
You tell a great story with few words, of warm autumn nights. It takes me back.
I like that "the laughing laundry" line and still kept the poem its shivers. Thanks for visiting. :D
What you did with the form here was a great pleasure to read. Vivid and evocative. And seasonal too! I went somewhere entirely different, and didn't even think of the seasonal aspect. Thank you for Jamming.
Oh I love that laughing laundry!! This is so very enjoyable Melanie!!
Yes, laughing laundry is a great phrase!! My Mum used to dress up and use a torch to "spookify" her face!!!! Thanks for bringing back memories... =)
Ghostly and laughing laundry. Good make believe, Melanie!Hank
Dear Cassiopeia Rises: Indeed great personification in the "laughing laundry" and snapshot perfect memories!
nice...you spun a nice seasonal story...that was fun. smiles.
Oh Yes! My favorite Halloween memory is of my father throwing a sheet over himself ... waiting for us to walk home from trick or treating ... jumping out from behind bushes - in the dark! We were thoroughly terrified, then laughed the rest of the evening at his prank. At least I don't think I suffered any lasting trauma.
ha...ha.. at long as it is the laughing laundry...happy sunday ~
Thanks gemma. It was a hard bunch of words. Glad you liked it.Melanie
Ah, thanks SPF for reading my work. Glad you liked it.Melanie
Yes, the laughing laundry is a deliciously evocative phrase
I love the image of "laughing laundry!" Wonderful!
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!