Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Hues Of Gold

vibrant hues of gold
tints of red orange plum and green
screen now empty trees

fairies hopes and dreams
woven mists move to drum beats
falls dancers have come

they twirl round and round
singing their sweet melodies
till dawn fills the sky

13 comments:

Tarang Sinha said...

Beautiful piece of writing & lovely imagery:)

Grace said...

I like the vibrant images of fairies dancing and twirling ~

Susie Clevenger said...

love the fantasy in this...dreams brought to live through your words

The Orange Tree said...

beautiful.

zongrik said...

it seems as if fairies could not exist in a place where the foliage is not vibrant.

Andy Sewina said...

You fit a lot into this piece, it's almost like flash fiction!

Nicely!

Ruchi Jain said...

So interesting....good one

Nanka said...

Vibrantly beautiful!! and a tribute to seasonal changes!!
The poem also gives me images of the Whirling Dervishes in motion!!

Judith Westerfield said...

I think this is one of your very best. -- I love the motion you've created with words.

The Write Girl said...

This is a beautiful poem filled with all the vivid colors of fall. So lovely Melanie!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Oh, how I welcome these dancers!

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Rajlakshmi said...

i loved the imagery .... lovely write

Blossom Vydrina said...

I have often thought of the fall leaves as fairy dancers :)