Cassiopeia Rises: Time

Sunday, October 9, 2011

Time

seems impossible
that time swift as an arrow
has left me alone

24 comments:

andy sewina said...: Phew, I guess an arrow is as fast or faster than a speeding bullet, what seems impossible is often not. Affairs of the heart can materialize at any time! Never say never...; October 9, 2011 at 7:18 PM
Judith Westerfield said...: time swift as an arrow -- POSSIBLY a perfect line!; October 9, 2011 at 11:21 PM
Richard Cody said...: And time will bring you home.; October 9, 2011 at 11:58 PM
Marsha said...: 'time swift as an arrow' IS a perfect line. I so get it.; October 10, 2011 at 12:40 AM
Nanka said...: The second line says a lot!! Hope Cupids arrow is just as swift!!; October 10, 2011 at 7:52 AM
Ruchi Jain said...: nice...; October 10, 2011 at 11:00 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks Andy. I do hope so.

Melanie; October 10, 2011 at 2:04 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Time does seem to speed by. Thanks for stopping by.

Melanie; October 10, 2011 at 2:05 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: I pray God it does. Thank you my friend.

Melanie; October 10, 2011 at 2:06 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks Marsha. Looks like you have your hands full. Keep them full always.

Melanie; October 10, 2011 at 2:07 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: I hope so too my friend.

Melanie; October 10, 2011 at 2:08 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank you my friend. Glad you liked it.

Melanie; October 10, 2011 at 2:10 PM
Amity said...: Time...it is beyond our control, we can't do much when it comes to an end...

But I love Cupid you know...long time ago...not this time na...:); October 11, 2011 at 3:33 AM
Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...: sad, bless you today.; October 11, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...: sad, bless you today.; October 11, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...: sad, bless you today.; October 11, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Tarang Sinha said...: "time swift as an arrow" I liked it. Nice:); October 11, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Amity, thank you for reading my work. No the end will come just pray you are not alone.

Melanie; October 11, 2011 at 12:43 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank you Morning. Sad seem to fill my days lately and bless you too.

Melanie; October 11, 2011 at 12:45 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Trang, so happy that you liked my poem.

Melanie; October 11, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Magical Mystical Teacher said...: Or does it just seem that way?

Impossible Flame; October 11, 2011 at 6:12 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: MMT, no it is that way. In the end time leaves you alone.

Melanie; October 11, 2011 at 7:44 PM
The Write Girl said...: Sad and beautiful words...such a poignant haiku Melanie.; October 11, 2011 at 9:42 PM
Grace said...: Sad voice in your haiku.. nice one ~; October 12, 2011 at 7:12 AM

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