Sunday, October 9, 2011

Time

seems impossible
that time swift as an arrow
has left me alone

24 comments:

andy sewina said...

Phew, I guess an arrow is as fast or faster than a speeding bullet, what seems impossible is often not. Affairs of the heart can materialize at any time! Never say never...

Judith Westerfield said...

time swift as an arrow -- POSSIBLY a perfect line!

Richard Cody said...

And time will bring you home.

Marsha said...

'time swift as an arrow' IS a perfect line. I so get it.

Nanka said...

The second line says a lot!! Hope Cupids arrow is just as swift!!

ruchi jain said...

nice...

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Andy. I do hope so.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Time does seem to speed by. Thanks for stopping by.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

I pray God it does. Thank you my friend.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Marsha. Looks like you have your hands full. Keep them full always.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

I hope so too my friend.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you my friend. Glad you liked it.

Melanie

Amity said...

Time...it is beyond our control, we can't do much when it comes to an end...

But I love Cupid you know...long time ago...not this time na...:)

Morning said...

sad, bless you today.

Morning said...

sad, bless you today.

Morning said...

sad, bless you today.

Tarang Sinha said...

"time swift as an arrow" I liked it. Nice:)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Amity, thank you for reading my work. No the end will come just pray you are not alone.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you Morning. Sad seem to fill my days lately and bless you too.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Trang, so happy that you liked my poem.


Melanie

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Or does it just seem that way?


Impossible Flame

Cassiopeia Rises said...

MMT, no it is that way. In the end time leaves you alone.


Melanie

The Write Girl said...

Sad and beautiful words...such a poignant haiku Melanie.

Grace said...

Sad voice in your haiku.. nice one ~