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Phew, I guess an arrow is as fast or faster than a speeding bullet, what seems impossible is often not. Affairs of the heart can materialize at any time! Never say never...
time swift as an arrow -- POSSIBLY a perfect line!
And time will bring you home.
'time swift as an arrow' IS a perfect line. I so get it.
The second line says a lot!! Hope Cupids arrow is just as swift!!
Thanks Andy. I do hope so.Melanie
Time does seem to speed by. Thanks for stopping by.Melanie
I pray God it does. Thank you my friend.Melanie
Thanks Marsha. Looks like you have your hands full. Keep them full always.Melanie
I hope so too my friend.Melanie
Thank you my friend. Glad you liked it.Melanie
Time...it is beyond our control, we can't do much when it comes to an end...But I love Cupid you know...long time ago...not this time na...:)
sad, bless you today.
"time swift as an arrow" I liked it. Nice:)
Amity, thank you for reading my work. No the end will come just pray you are not alone.Melanie
Thank you Morning. Sad seem to fill my days lately and bless you too.Melanie
Trang, so happy that you liked my poem.Melanie
Or does it just seem that way?Impossible Flame
MMT, no it is that way. In the end time leaves you alone.Melanie
Sad and beautiful words...such a poignant haiku Melanie.
Sad voice in your haiku.. nice one ~
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!