Cassiopeia Rises: Nights Love ( a repost)

Thursday, October 13, 2011

Nights Love ( a repost)

rising from her bed
she washes nights love away
dripping on the floor

This is a poor copy of a poet well known among us. His poetry is outstanding. I love to read his work.

23 comments:

Aphrodite said...: Am I right to sense regret? Touching haiku!; October 13, 2011 at 4:57 PM
Anonymous said...: The last line left me with the sense of regret as well. Nicely done.

Beth; October 13, 2011 at 5:44 PM
Mary said...: Though I don't know the other poet, I certainly can appreciate your haiku. Beautifully sensual words.; October 13, 2011 at 6:53 PM
Victoria said...: So glad you reposted this sensitive haiku since I missed it the fist time around. Lovely.; October 13, 2011 at 7:36 PM
Brian Miller said...: hope she keeps just a bit for herself...i do sense some regret in this as well...and today is a new day...; October 13, 2011 at 8:07 PM
Anonymous said...: I was in a different place, until I read these other comments...... then it struck me. Agreed..... quite touching....; October 13, 2011 at 10:54 PM
Claudia said...: the night love dripping on the floor makes a haunting picture...like losing so much in a short movement...enjoyed your haiku...much said in few words; October 14, 2011 at 12:13 AM
Suzy Q said...: Sadness wells beneath these fragile lines.
Haunting.; October 14, 2011 at 5:44 AM
Medhini said...: Lovely words...; October 14, 2011 at 12:57 PM
tinkwelborn said...: powerful Haiku!
wonderful Job here!
3 Wows for you..cause, methinks this the best poem I've read tonight.
thank you.; October 14, 2011 at 7:25 PM
The Noiseless Cuckooclock said...: moving Haiku,
have a lovely day today.; October 15, 2011 at 9:10 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank you Aida. Glad you liked it and yes it is a bit sad.

Melanie; October 15, 2011 at 1:53 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks Beth for your kind comments.

Melanie; October 15, 2011 at 1:54 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Much thanks Mary. Glad you liked it. As I said it is a poor ghost to his poetry.

Melanie; October 15, 2011 at 1:55 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks Victoria. Glad you came back to read it.

Melanie; October 15, 2011 at 1:56 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Life is often strange Brian and love knows no end.

Melanie; October 15, 2011 at 1:58 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank you JAR. Glad you liked it.

Melanie; October 15, 2011 at 1:59 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks Claudia. She did lose much in just one movement. So glad you liked it.

Melanie; October 15, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: SuzyQ, much thanks for stopping by and reading my work. I do sadness very well.

Melanie; October 15, 2011 at 2:03 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks Midhini for your comments.

Melanie; October 15, 2011 at 2:04 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: tinkwelborn, thank you very much for your kind comment. Happy you enjoyed it.

Melanie; October 15, 2011 at 2:05 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks The Noiseless Cuckooclock for reading my Haiku.

Melanie; October 15, 2011 at 2:06 PM
Anonymous said...: there is a quietness to this, it almost whispers.. a wonderful haiku ~; October 15, 2011 at 7:58 PM

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