absorption remains sorrow
letting go is hard
paper tears not real
only feed a rich anger
when love could bind all
give me the freedom
to search your inner being
and feel your soft heart
love raptures us all
willing or not we grow
into loves true gift
10 comments:
Very meaningful Melanie!! ....yes anger is so destructive and divisive whilst love can be so cohesive and bonding for growth!!
paper tears is such a cool image..and i agree with what nanka said...it's good to grow into love but sometimes not that easy
Thanks much Nanka. You are a faithful reader. Sometimes when I write a poem( Senryu)I start going in one direction and end up in the other. So glad you liked it.
Melanie
Oh Claudia how true is what you say It is nor easy. So glad you stopped by to read my work.
Melanie
Love the visual of 'paper tears'.
"Willing or not we grow into loves'
true gift". An inspiring phrase.
A melancholy shaded poem, yet filled
with hope and wisdom.
This is lovely.
:)
teric, thanks for stopping by and am glad you liked my poem.
Melanie
Cynthia, yes we must all hope no matter how sad our lives may be.
Melanie
Morning. so glad you liked my poem.
Melanie
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