Saturday, October 8, 2011

Oh My Love

oh my love, words we once spoke are forgotten
time, time so cruel so short and I can not remember
your touch your voice our loving together
would but time give back what it has taken
could I but know and taste our sweet murmurings once more
if you could but forgive my pride and take away my pain
I long to kiss your lips,feel your heat as we lie side by side again

11 comments:

crimsoncorvus said...

oh my love... what a piece. what longing it conveys! nicely done!

please check my entry too: "A Sudden Rush"

You can also check my poetry collection @ "A Murder of Poems"

Brian Miller said...

lovely piece for the jam...if only we could turn back time and take back the things we did that steal our love...well played...

Helen said...

No cliches in sight .... beautiful poem for the Jam!

zongrik said...

can we ever go back?

http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/triolet-vi/

Andy said...

Hello.
The sense of longing & regret is ever present.

Beautifully expressed!

Thanks for sharing & visiting. Much appreciated.

Yesterday With You

zongrik said...

it's interesting that we can forget the words, but not the taste.

I touch on this in my Poem

The Kiss

Jinksy said...

Love lost is always sad...

gautami tripathy said...

It made me ache...

alley and valley

Morning said...

sad.

Morning said...
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Morning said...

sad, strong emotions stated.