time, time so cruel so short and I can not remember
your touch your voice our loving together
would but time give back what it has taken
could I but know and taste our sweet murmurings once more
if you could but forgive my pride and take away my pain
I long to kiss your lips,feel your heat as we lie side by side again
11 comments:
oh my love... what a piece. what longing it conveys! nicely done!
please check my entry too: "A Sudden Rush"
You can also check my poetry collection @ "A Murder of Poems"
lovely piece for the jam...if only we could turn back time and take back the things we did that steal our love...well played...
No cliches in sight .... beautiful poem for the Jam!
can we ever go back?
http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/triolet-vi/
Hello.
The sense of longing & regret is ever present.
Beautifully expressed!
Thanks for sharing & visiting. Much appreciated.
Yesterday With You
it's interesting that we can forget the words, but not the taste.
I touch on this in my Poem
The Kiss
Love lost is always sad...
It made me ache...
alley and valley
sad.
sad, strong emotions stated.
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