and see eternity
my heart bleeds for you
but you care not
shall I give you my soul
my very being.
my life's plan
or should I forget you
and all your beautiful words
that thrill my being
let me go, let me love another
I cling to you as if we were lovers
yet I know you have forgotten me.
I look into your eyes
I look into your eyes
26 comments:
I really liked this one.
This is very beautiful and touching!
Thank you Lilly for reading my poem. So glad you liked it.
Melanie
Much thanks Rebecca for stopping by and reading my poem. Glad you enjoyed it.
Melanie
such deep longing. beautifully done!
Thank you Hope. I feel the same way about this poem.
Melanie
Oh oh I can relate to this ^_^ Love this poem thanks for sharing!
Kim,USA
kinda haunting...to love one so much and know they have already forgotten yes still ready to give up your very essence....
Very nice piece. Thanks for the read:)
I can certainly relate to this. Very touching, and sad.
Lovely poem.
Thank you Kim, glad you liked my poem.
Melanie
I have been there many times Brian. It's kind of lonely. Glad you liked my poem.
Melanie
Thanks Fred for stopping by and reading my poem.
Melanie
Yes me too. I have been there many times.
Melanie
Thanks Kay for reading my poem.
Melanie
lyrical yet fragrant.:)
the repetition serves you well here. Nice write
it is hard when you know in your heart they have forgotten but you can not forget and you still cling to them. What an excellent poem filled with so much love and emotions
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/20/taken-from-me-on-halloween-night/
Love entraps here, nay - enslaves.
the poor speaker needs release.
good poem, I can't feel the speaker's anguish.
moving words.
how sad when love is not returned.
Hello.
Touching & heartfelt.
Beautifully expressed.
Thanks for sharing.
Bashful Lady
Wow, this hurts!
I hate this feeling so much out of the one that it hurts most from... thanks for expressing it!
sad,
best regard,
powerful expression!
Great poem. Amazing ending, like the repetition.
Could not find your blog so must thank you here. Much thanks Ann LeFlore for stopping by and reading my work. Hope to read some of yours sometime.
Melanie
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