Tuesday, October 18, 2011

You Have Forgotten

I look into your eyes
and see eternity
my heart bleeds for you
but you care not
shall I give you my soul
my very being.
my life's plan
or should I forget you
and all your beautiful words
that thrill my being
let me go, let me love another
I cling to you as if we were lovers
yet I know you have forgotten me.
I look into your eyes
I look into your eyes

26 comments:

Lilly said...

I really liked this one.

Rebecca said...

This is very beautiful and touching!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you Lilly for reading my poem. So glad you liked it.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks Rebecca for stopping by and reading my poem. Glad you enjoyed it.


Melanie

Hope said...

such deep longing. beautifully done!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you Hope. I feel the same way about this poem.


Melanie

Kim, USA said...

Oh oh I can relate to this ^_^ Love this poem thanks for sharing!

Kim,USA

Brian Miller said...

kinda haunting...to love one so much and know they have already forgotten yes still ready to give up your very essence....

Fred said...

Very nice piece. Thanks for the read:)

halfwaybetweenthegutter said...

I can certainly relate to this. Very touching, and sad.

Kay said...

Lovely poem.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you Kim, glad you liked my poem.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

I have been there many times Brian. It's kind of lonely. Glad you liked my poem.

Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Fred for stopping by and reading my poem.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Yes me too. I have been there many times.



Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Kay for reading my poem.



Melanie

Sheelonee Mukherjee said...

lyrical yet fragrant.:)

Luke Prater said...

the repetition serves you well here. Nice write

Ann LeFlore said...

it is hard when you know in your heart they have forgotten but you can not forget and you still cling to them. What an excellent poem filled with so much love and emotions
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/20/taken-from-me-on-halloween-night/

tinkwelborn said...

Love entraps here, nay - enslaves.
the poor speaker needs release.
good poem, I can't feel the speaker's anguish.

The Orange Tree said...

moving words.
how sad when love is not returned.

Andy said...

Hello.
Touching & heartfelt.

Beautifully expressed.
Thanks for sharing.

Bashful Lady

Aynsley (Life In Verse) said...

Wow, this hurts!
I hate this feeling so much out of the one that it hurts most from... thanks for expressing it!

The Cello Strings said...

sad,
best regard,
powerful expression!

Jack Edwards Poetry said...

Great poem. Amazing ending, like the repetition.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Could not find your blog so must thank you here. Much thanks Ann LeFlore for stopping by and reading my work. Hope to read some of yours sometime.


Melanie