Sunday, October 16, 2011

Bath Time Dreaming

she soaked in her tub
softly sponging her body
daydreaming of him

lying back she smiled
ardent were his kisses sweet
lips smooth and giving

tonight she would know
as stars raced across the sky
if his love was true

8 comments:

Susie Clevenger said...

I am in love with love and this poem speak to my lover's heart...good one :)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Susie. I thought I was in love but I guess It was only coming from my side. Hard to let go. I am glad you liked it.


Melanie

Andy Sewina said...

I so hope the writers dream comes true, it sounds like she deserves to be loved!

meethimirchi said...

A classy & seductive haiku that any guy I'm sure would want to take part in dreaming and hopefully making a reality.

The Noiseless Cuckooclock said...

romantic, how she day dreams of him in bath tub.
wow.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

The stars would tell?

Sponging up the river

Grace said...

Sweet dreams while bathing... I hope her wishes come true.

beccagivens said...

Lovely sentiments of passionate love!