Cassiopeia Rises: Bath Time Dreaming

Sunday, October 16, 2011

Bath Time Dreaming

she soaked in her tub
softly sponging her body
daydreaming of him

lying back she smiled
ardent were his kisses sweet
lips smooth and giving

tonight she would know
as stars raced across the sky
if his love was true

8 comments:

Susie Clevenger said...: I am in love with love and this poem speak to my lover's heart...good one :); October 16, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks Susie. I thought I was in love but I guess It was only coming from my side. Hard to let go. I am glad you liked it.

Melanie; October 16, 2011 at 3:34 PM
Andy Sewina said...: I so hope the writers dream comes true, it sounds like she deserves to be loved!; October 23, 2011 at 7:28 PM
Anonymous said...: A classy & seductive haiku that any guy I'm sure would want to take part in dreaming and hopefully making a reality.; October 24, 2011 at 9:04 AM
The Noiseless Cuckooclock said...: romantic, how she day dreams of him in bath tub.
wow.; October 25, 2011 at 1:38 PM
Magical Mystical Teacher said...: The stars would tell?

Sponging up the river; October 26, 2011 at 8:23 PM
Grace said...: Sweet dreams while bathing... I hope her wishes come true.; October 28, 2011 at 6:42 PM
Anonymous said...: Lovely sentiments of passionate love!; October 28, 2011 at 11:28 PM

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