Cassiopeia Rises: Predestined

Wednesday, July 13, 2011

Predestined

my indecision led to death
no option of power over this had I
alas my fate was predestined

17 comments:

Linda Jacobs said...: Ooooh, that's a tough one to take! Penned beautifully!; July 13, 2011 at 10:48 AM
Sheilagh Lee said...: wow this one left me speechless for moment deliciously good.; July 13, 2011 at 12:17 PM
Angel said...: I like it, but you left out option didn't you?; July 13, 2011 at 2:25 PM
Altonian said...: Small, but strong. Proves it's best to make your mind up.; July 13, 2011 at 3:30 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank You Linda, for your great comments. Glad you liked it.

Melanie; July 13, 2011 at 4:03 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks Sheilagh. If you how fast I wrote it after seeing the three words, I would have to blush.
Happy you liked it.

Melanie; July 13, 2011 at 4:05 PM
Anonymous said...: Such a powerful emotional weight to such spare writing - just lovely. :); July 13, 2011 at 10:09 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Much thanks Linda. So glad you liked it.

Melanie; July 14, 2011 at 4:14 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Sheilagh, thanks your comment means a lot.

Melanie; July 14, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: laurie, thanks for stopping by and reading my work. Happy you liked it.

Melanie; July 14, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Yes I did. Only because If I used free will, it would not have been as dark. Glad you liked it anyway.

Melanie; July 14, 2011 at 4:18 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Ah, but what about free will. Can we be predestined. This idea is best for Sunday Bible study. Glad you liked it.

Melanie; July 14, 2011 at 4:27 PM
Unknown said...: short
sweet
smart; July 14, 2011 at 7:40 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: TGR,much thanks for your comments.
Glad you liked my work.

Melanie; July 15, 2011 at 2:18 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks Kim, glad you liked it.

Melanie; July 15, 2011 at 2:27 PM
Jenny said...: I debate this theory with myself...I love the way you wrote this.; July 17, 2011 at 2:15 PM
Anonymous said...: Powerful observation expressed in such a concise manner ... nicely done!; July 23, 2011 at 2:45 PM

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