Wednesday, July 13, 2011

Predestined

my indecision led to death
no option of power over this had I
alas my fate was predestined

18 comments:

Linda Jacobs said...

Ooooh, that's a tough one to take! Penned beautifully!

Sheilagh Lee said...

wow this one left me speechless for moment deliciously good.

Laurie Kolp said...

Powerful!

Angel said...

I like it, but you left out option didn't you?

Altonian said...

Small, but strong. Proves it's best to make your mind up.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank You Linda, for your great comments. Glad you liked it.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Sheilagh. If you how fast I wrote it after seeing the three words, I would have to blush.
Happy you liked it.


Melanie

thisgirlremembers said...

Such a powerful emotional weight to such spare writing - just lovely. :)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks Linda. So glad you liked it.

Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Sheilagh, thanks your comment means a lot.

Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

laurie, thanks for stopping by and reading my work. Happy you liked it.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Yes I did. Only because If I used free will, it would not have been as dark. Glad you liked it anyway.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Ah, but what about free will. Can we be predestined. This idea is best for Sunday Bible study. Glad you liked it.


Melanie

Kim Nelson said...

short
sweet
smart

Cassiopeia Rises said...

TGR,much thanks for your comments.
Glad you liked my work.

Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Kim, glad you liked it.


Melanie

Jenny said...

I debate this theory with myself...I love the way you wrote this.

beccagivens said...

Powerful observation expressed in such a concise manner ... nicely done!