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Ooooh, that's a tough one to take! Penned beautifully!
wow this one left me speechless for moment deliciously good.
I like it, but you left out option didn't you?
Small, but strong. Proves it's best to make your mind up.
Thank You Linda, for your great comments. Glad you liked it.Melanie
Thanks Sheilagh. If you how fast I wrote it after seeing the three words, I would have to blush.Happy you liked it.Melanie
Such a powerful emotional weight to such spare writing - just lovely. :)
Much thanks Linda. So glad you liked it.Melanie
Sheilagh, thanks your comment means a lot.Melanie
laurie, thanks for stopping by and reading my work. Happy you liked it.Melanie
Yes I did. Only because If I used free will, it would not have been as dark. Glad you liked it anyway.Melanie
Ah, but what about free will. Can we be predestined. This idea is best for Sunday Bible study. Glad you liked it.Melanie
TGR,much thanks for your comments.Glad you liked my work.Melanie
Thanks Kim, glad you liked it.Melanie
I debate this theory with myself...I love the way you wrote this.
Powerful observation expressed in such a concise manner ... nicely done!
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!