Cassiopeia Rises: Moon Tides

Monday, July 11, 2011

Moon Tides

pale cold light
spun quicksilver
on gossamer leaves.

moon tides ebb then flow
as men's hearts
ride the luminous waves

9 comments:

Marbles in My Pocket said...: simply, darkly, beautiful; July 11, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank you MIMP. It is so nice that you stopped by and read my poem.
I feel over whelmed by all the poems to be read but I will read your for sure.

Melanie; July 11, 2011 at 4:13 PM
Jingle said...: smart write.
love the imagery.; July 11, 2011 at 4:56 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: thank you Jingle. As I said to MIMP. I feel over whelmed with all the sites I post on and all of the poetry i must read. i am behind myself and ask forgiveness. will try to catch up.

Melanie; July 11, 2011 at 5:16 PM
Anonymous said...: hey...sweet, dark and lovely; July 12, 2011 at 9:16 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: the feeling lioness, thanks for stopping by. I am glad you liked my poem.

Melanie; July 12, 2011 at 12:05 PM
Vinay Leo R. said...: I like the description of the moonlight! Wow. Very beautiful, Melanie!

My poem ~ A Poetic World; July 13, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Shashidhar Sharma said...: Dear Melanie

I enjoyed it thoroughly... your simple words carry a big punch...

Thanks for joining in the Poetry Potluck WK 43 which I am hosting for the first time… hope you have liked it too…. and wish to see you again…

Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/07/whispers-cuckoos-song-and-smell-of-love.html
At Twitter @VerseEveryDay; July 14, 2011 at 11:06 PM
The Poet said...: I love the ending of this poem.

Simply beautiful.

My entry:
http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/07/stars-have-winked-at-you.html; July 16, 2011 at 12:31 AM

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