Monday, July 11, 2011

Moon Tides



pale cold light
spun quicksilver
on gossamer leaves.


moon tides ebb then flow
as men's hearts
ride the luminous waves

9 comments:

Marbles in My Pocket said...

simply, darkly, beautiful

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you MIMP. It is so nice that you stopped by and read my poem.
I feel over whelmed by all the poems to be read but I will read your for sure.

Melanie

Jingle said...

smart write.
love the imagery.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

thank you Jingle. As I said to MIMP. I feel over whelmed with all the sites I post on and all of the poetry i must read. i am behind myself and ask forgiveness. will try to catch up.

Melanie

the feeling lioness said...

hey...sweet, dark and lovely

Cassiopeia Rises said...

the feeling lioness, thanks for stopping by. I am glad you liked my poem.


Melanie

Leo said...

I like the description of the moonlight! Wow. Very beautiful, Melanie!

My poem ~ A Poetic World

Shashi said...

Dear Melanie

I enjoyed it thoroughly... your simple words carry a big punch...

Thanks for joining in the Poetry Potluck WK 43 which I am hosting for the first time… hope you have liked it too…. and wish to see you again…

Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/07/whispers-cuckoos-song-and-smell-of-love.html
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Andy said...

I love the ending of this poem.

Simply beautiful.

My entry:
http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/07/stars-have-winked-at-you.html