Monday, July 11, 2011

Moon Tides

pale cold light
spun quicksilver
on gossamer leaves.

moon tides ebb then flow
as men's hearts
ride the luminous waves


Marbles in My Pocket said...

simply, darkly, beautiful

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you MIMP. It is so nice that you stopped by and read my poem.
I feel over whelmed by all the poems to be read but I will read your for sure.


Jingle said...

smart write.
love the imagery.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

thank you Jingle. As I said to MIMP. I feel over whelmed with all the sites I post on and all of the poetry i must read. i am behind myself and ask forgiveness. will try to catch up.


the feeling lioness said...

hey...sweet, dark and lovely

Cassiopeia Rises said...

the feeling lioness, thanks for stopping by. I am glad you liked my poem.


Leo said...

I like the description of the moonlight! Wow. Very beautiful, Melanie!

My poem ~ A Poetic World

Shashi said...

Dear Melanie

I enjoyed it thoroughly... your simple words carry a big punch...

Thanks for joining in the Poetry Potluck WK 43 which I am hosting for the first time… hope you have liked it too…. and wish to see you again…

ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
At Twitter @VerseEveryDay

Andy said...

I love the ending of this poem.

Simply beautiful.

My entry: