Monday, July 25, 2011

At Night

In my head I paint a picture of what you were
though I see you clearly through the mist
that filters around you
words sounding in my head
your voice fills my soul
too soon too soon your voice fills my being

8 comments:

trailsofthepen said...

It feels it's a part of a song. :D This is my first time to participate in Carrying On Tuesdays so thanks for sharing.

Mike Patrick said...

You build a strong picture. I have to agree with traisofthepen, much of you poem is very melodic.

Laurie Kolp said...

Beautiful and flowing like a melody.

WyomingDiva said...

Intriguing - well written!

gsb3 said...

Very immediate and romantic. Strong words for strong feelings. Good job!

upinthecosmos said...

Great take on the phrase, nice flow and it stays with ya:-)

Whitesnake said...

Oh yes, beautifully weaved.

How come NZ is NOT on ya visitor map?

Jingle said...

superb.