Cassiopeia Rises: At Night

Monday, July 25, 2011

At Night

In my head I paint a picture of what you were
though I see you clearly through the mist
that filters around you
words sounding in my head
your voice fills my soul
too soon too soon your voice fills my being

8 comments:

Raine said...: It feels it's a part of a song. :D This is my first time to participate in Carrying On Tuesdays so thanks for sharing.; July 26, 2011 at 2:00 AM
Mike Patrick said...: You build a strong picture. I have to agree with traisofthepen, much of you poem is very melodic.; July 26, 2011 at 3:30 PM
Laurie Kolp said...: Beautiful and flowing like a melody.; July 26, 2011 at 8:33 PM
WyomingDiva said...: Intriguing - well written!; July 26, 2011 at 11:03 PM
gsb3 said...: Very immediate and romantic. Strong words for strong feelings. Good job!; July 27, 2011 at 9:41 AM
Unknown said...: Great take on the phrase, nice flow and it stays with ya:-); July 27, 2011 at 2:39 PM
Whitesnake said...: Oh yes, beautifully weaved.

How come NZ is NOT on ya visitor map?; July 27, 2011 at 6:38 PM
Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...: superb.; July 31, 2011 at 5:46 PM

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