Cassiopeia Rises: The Flaw

Monday, July 4, 2011

The Flaw

within each one lies
a flaw buried deep beneath our hearts
do not head it's call
though strange sometimes is the pull
into the darkness that waits

6 comments:

Anonymous said...: There's a lot of truth in this.

One thing: did you mean 'heed' instead of 'head'?; July 5, 2011 at 4:48 AM
Anonymous said...: no matter how sad the content, it's truly beautifully; July 6, 2011 at 1:12 AM
Anonymous said...: Lovely and haunting; July 6, 2011 at 5:39 AM
Anonymous said...: Powerful take on the prompt!; July 8, 2011 at 12:46 AM
Vinay Leo R. said...: yes.. a flaw is there, and more often than not, that pull is deadly. powerful tanka!; July 9, 2011 at 7:59 AM
bttrflyscar said...: lovely take :); July 11, 2011 at 1:35 PM

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