Monday, July 4, 2011

The Flaw



within each one lies
a flaw buried deep beneath our hearts
do not head it's call
though strange sometimes is the pull
into the darkness that waits

6 comments:

imnotaverse said...

There's a lot of truth in this.

One thing: did you mean 'heed' instead of 'head'?

meethimirchi said...

no matter how sad the content, it's truly beautifully

mindlovemisery said...

Lovely and haunting

beccagivens said...

Powerful take on the prompt!

Leo said...

yes.. a flaw is there, and more often than not, that pull is deadly. powerful tanka!

bttrflyscar said...

lovely take :)