Monday, July 4, 2011

The Flaw



within each one lies
a flaw buried deep beneath our hearts
do not head it's call
though strange sometimes is the pull
into the darkness that waits

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

There's a lot of truth in this.

One thing: did you mean 'heed' instead of 'head'?

Anonymous said...

no matter how sad the content, it's truly beautifully

Anonymous said...

Lovely and haunting

Anonymous said...

Powerful take on the prompt!

Leo said...

yes.. a flaw is there, and more often than not, that pull is deadly. powerful tanka!

bttrflyscar said...

lovely take :)