your body next to mine
I open like a lotus
to your need
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
1916
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!
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3 comments:
this is such a beautiful little piece! i admire how much emotion you have packed into so short a poem. i can feel the desire. great work! :)
Thank you my friend. I am glad you liked it.
Melanie
I have not yet tried the haiku to intimacy... reading yours, might try it ~
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