Thursday, July 28, 2011

Nights Love

rising from her bed
she washes nights love away
dripping on the floor

5 comments:

M. A. S. said...

Wow. That's a potent image. Makes me want to hear more. I get the feeling she was very pleased to wash the night away.

Peggy Nolan said...

Sounds like she had a very good time =)

dan roberson said...

Powerful image in just a few words. Loved it!

Adam said...

A lot said with a few words, very nice :)

mindlovemisery said...

Gorgeous poem and imagery