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this would be a senryu though as it tackles a subject outside nature...hot post ~
A note to Heaven:What could be more "natural" than the coming together in love (or lust) of two bodies?Just wondering...
beautiful haiku (or senryu as the case may be). Passionate and emotional :)
A senryu so it is. It led fond emotions to a higher level. The good thing is, everyone can relate to such feelings.
beautiful and passionate haiku..Someone is Special
My dear Heaven, I know the difference between the two. I thank you for reading my work and am glad you liked it. As I said before you have a great talent. Explore it...Melanie
MMT, she is speaking as I know you know of that pure moment in time when nature speaks. To me two lovers together are a pure moment in nature.Melanie
Ah Leo, ever the peace maker. You know each poet see things differently. Glad you liked it.Melanie
Thank you kaykuala . As you say. What does it matter. I get tired of talking about flowers.Melanie
Much thanks SIS. Haiku,Senryu...I don't care. I write what is in my heart. Thanks so much for your comments.Melanie
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!