Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Heat Rising

heat rises slowly
we burn with a
lust
bodies together

10 comments:

Heaven said...

this would be a senryu though as it tackles a subject outside nature...

hot post ~

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

A note to Heaven:

What could be more "natural" than the coming together in love (or lust) of two bodies?

Just wondering...

Leo said...

beautiful haiku (or senryu as the case may be). Passionate and emotional :)

kaykuala said...

A senryu so it is. It led fond emotions to a higher level. The good thing is, everyone can relate to such feelings.

Someone is Special said...

beautiful and passionate haiku..

Someone is Special

Cassiopeia Rises said...

My dear Heaven, I know the difference between the two. I thank you for reading my work and am glad you liked it. As I said before you have a great talent. Explore it...

Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

MMT, she is speaking as I know you know of that pure moment in time when nature speaks. To me two lovers together are a pure moment in nature.

Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Ah Leo, ever the peace maker. You know each poet see things differently. Glad you liked it.

Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you kaykuala . As you say. What does it matter. I get tired of talking about flowers.

Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks SIS. Haiku,Senryu...I don't care. I write what is in my heart. Thanks so much for your comments.

Melanie