Cassiopeia Rises: Heat Rising

Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Heat Rising

heat rises slowly
we burn with a
lust
bodies together

10 comments:

Scarlet said...: this would be a senryu though as it tackles a subject outside nature...

hot post ~; July 27, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Magical Mystical Teacher said...: A note to Heaven:

What could be more "natural" than the coming together in love (or lust) of two bodies?

Just wondering...; July 27, 2011 at 10:08 PM
Vinay Leo R. said...: beautiful haiku (or senryu as the case may be). Passionate and emotional :); July 28, 2011 at 10:00 AM
kaykuala said...: A senryu so it is. It led fond emotions to a higher level. The good thing is, everyone can relate to such feelings.; July 28, 2011 at 11:21 AM
Someone is Special said...: beautiful and passionate haiku..

Someone is Special; July 28, 2011 at 1:29 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: My dear Heaven, I know the difference between the two. I thank you for reading my work and am glad you liked it. As I said before you have a great talent. Explore it...

Melanie; July 28, 2011 at 2:06 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: MMT, she is speaking as I know you know of that pure moment in time when nature speaks. To me two lovers together are a pure moment in nature.

Melanie; July 28, 2011 at 2:09 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Ah Leo, ever the peace maker. You know each poet see things differently. Glad you liked it.

Melanie; July 28, 2011 at 2:10 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank you kaykuala . As you say. What does it matter. I get tired of talking about flowers.

Melanie; July 28, 2011 at 2:12 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Much thanks SIS. Haiku,Senryu...I don't care. I write what is in my heart. Thanks so much for your comments.

Melanie; July 28, 2011 at 2:14 PM

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