Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Desire


dappled moonlight
plays
softly along your body
my desire great

11 comments:

haikudoyou said...

Beautiful and well put - Enjoyed reading it

The Purple said...

amazing.

Jingle said...

enjoyed it.
have fun in the rally.

Padmavani said...

Sensual! Loved the write.

Cheers
Padmavani

okelle said...

Immediate and sensual.

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Very nice.

Andy said...

Short & sensual. Doesn't get any better.

Nicely done!

lunawitch15 said...

has a great erotic feel. Nice one yet again!

Luna

booguloo said...

Nice Senryu.

jennifaye said...

the moonlight makes us all poets :) nice poem you have here.

Blaga said...

The moonlight always brings dreamy images! Beautiful! Thanks for sharing!

Here is my Rally http://brokensparkles.wordpress.com/2011/07/31/musings/